Loved it! I had two thoughts! First was akin to Schrödinger's cat, that both couples are locked in some neither dead nor alive loop or they are both alive but there's some time plane mix up. Second, was that obviously these are after life stories so one couple must be a ghost. But I couldn't make up my mind which one!
Guess I need to write it a bit clearer then ! Intention being the first part is written from the ghosts' point of view but they don't realise they're ghosts. Ah well...
A right spookish tale, Ronald. I'm stayin out of those rhyolite nasties.
Loved it! I had two thoughts! First was akin to Schrödinger's cat, that both couples are locked in some neither dead nor alive loop or they are both alive but there's some time plane mix up. Second, was that obviously these are after life stories so one couple must be a ghost. But I couldn't make up my mind which one!
Guess I need to write it a bit clearer then ! Intention being the first part is written from the ghosts' point of view but they don't realise they're ghosts. Ah well...
Haha I don't think it's about the clarity - readers have their own preconceptions!